Rebeccak,
Thank you for the reply,
so I am posting again 
Al_Morrow,
My sketches are not digital I feel more comfortable
with pencils for now .You have nice feel of motion in your sketches,
May be you shoud try using less lines as I should do:).But this is
just an advice.
I am reading Rebeccakās explanations and individual critiques on people gestures and trying to imply this on the sketches in this thread .
So these for now:


For the second I used a large sheet of paper so I scanned it in two parts.
M.











