Hi guys,
I’m currently doing an acting animation mentoring and I’d like to share my current work in progress with you.
Here is the link: http://vimeo.com/46384239
Hope you’ll like it 
I’m still working on it but feel free to give me your point of view, advice, crits…
Note: On camera2 and camera3, the secondary character is not animated yet
Thanks a lot !!
Hi thekinder!
First of all I have no idea what the lady mumbles at the end and its very distracting. Also the shot seems to cut very suddenly so maybe you could give it a few frames at the end to settle.
Maybe try going in tighter with the 1st and 3rd cameras.
You could push the girls disgusted pose a bit more.
The lip sync in the 1st and 2nd camera seems to be a frame or two too slow.
Why does the guy lift his arms around 119?
Also the girls smug face at the very end is very similar to the smug face the guy pulls at the start so maybe you should change the look that one of them pulls.
hope that helps and I look forward to seeing the next version of this.
-Yasha
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