I need your help about English.


#1

Could you please check my sentences if they are wrong?

The most difficult shot was the shot contains the wild boar which is coming forward.
But at that time I was a new employee and there was no one who can advise me about hair rendering.
So I had to figure it out by myself.
I set up separate lighting rig for hair by using 3 point lighting with a spotlight.
Fortunately, I succeeded in reduce render time and I was able to finish the task by the deadline.


#2

Make it a word document. For sure, all grammatical errors will be checked. but I not sure if this is 100% reliable though. LOL.


#3

“The most difficult shot was the shot contains the wild boar which is coming forward.”
Is the shot about a boar moving in a forward direction or is the shot moving?
I assume it is about the boar moving forward/towards you (the camera).
The most difficult shot was the one that contains the boar coming towards the camera.
But at the time I was a new employee and there was no one who could advise me about hair rendering, so I had to figure it out by myself.”
“I set up a separate lighting rig for hair by using 3 point lighting with spotlights.
Fortunately, I succeeded in reducing render time and was able to finish the task on time.”

I am not a native speaker, but I hope it helps.