Hello there 
I´m a graphic designer, I live in Mexico City and I need some help with this illustration. I´m trying to create some female characters with a Bioluminescent body, they live in an underwater cave, I have some problems with the female character on the right, There is something on the position of her legs that just doesn´t work.
Any response will help me and I will be very greatful, thanks.
Are you using appropriate references?
The composition is problematic, since it looks like you’ve never studied composition. There’s also no tonal composition and a tangible lighting scheme to speak of. The anatomy/figure is also quite shaky.
I highly recommend you head on over to the Art Techniques & Theories forum (linked below in my signature) and start studying the critical foundations of visual art. That is the only way you’re going to advanced forward as an artist, and only by focusing on the foundations will you have any chance of becoming the artist you aspire to be.
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