I need help to go further on in this animation !

#1

I’ve spent ages in this and that brought me frustration. I need feedback, somebody to tell me how to go further to guide me on out from my block, pleeeeeeeeeeez !

[https://sites.google.com/site/ladokar/home/my-recent-draft-2d-animation](https://sites.google.com/site/ladokar/home/my-recent-draft-2d-animation)

thanks in advance :)
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#2

I think it looks nice–obviously when you refine it you can do some subtle overlapping and slight shifting. But this is great so far!

#3

Narntson, thanks for your assuring comment, I will start do my refinements once I had suggested the final coherent draft… :stuck_out_tongue:

#4

Here is the new version after working more on the shots…wish to have good critiques
https://sites.google.com/site/ladokar/home/my-recent-draft-2d-animation

thanks in advance :)

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#5

thats really cool!

#6

Thanks Yasha,

Nice reel, hope you all success !
Keep the effort and one day you will be among the best!!! Frans Vischer, sort of example…

#7

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