Holiday Animation

#1

My holiday film is available at http://amfilms.hash.com/search/entry.php?entry=1001.

Created with A:M 2005 V11.1b.

Critiques are welcome.

racreel

#2

Hello.

Charming piece. Keekat is my one of my favorite characters, from the Hash stable.

Here are two pennies worth of crits:
The color of the riendeer-shafts and the base of the snow globe are rather intense. It looks like pure blue and pure green, straight from the color chip selector, as a matter of fact. A pastel blue and a pastel green would be easier on the eyes.
Keekat’s tail wag could use a few extra keys, to make it whip side to side, maybe? Sort of like this:
http://www.sonic.net/raillard/hash/wag.mov
Okay, Gaty is putting a bit too much energy into that tail whip. This is the movement, but it would have to be much slower, to fit the relaxed mood of your animation.

Maybe add a sled in the background with the word “Rosebud” on it?

Actually, I really like your animation as is. :applause: The music is soothing, too. Perfect for jangled holiday nerves.

Thanks for sharing!

Sincerely,

Carl Raillard

#3

Thanks Carl, I appreciate the comments. The colors are a bit strong, I was going for a cheap plastic look to them.

Richard

#4

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