Hi everyone,Can you help me,please?

#1

My submission has been declined.still not finished? Were they still not complete? or somthing wrong with them ? (sorry about my English.)
Thanks!

#2

The first image appears kind of haphazard. What’s the point of this image? What are you trying to convey? Is there a story behind it? It feels like you slapped two figures on an arbitrary background without thinking about why an audience would want to see it. The line art looks too mechanical, without organic and expressive variations in line thickness and tapering, and overpowers the overall image (too strong and heavy).

The second image has some issues with anatomy/figure. Her right elbow appears to be broken, because the forearm and upper arm do not line up properly. You have to “draw through” to make sure everything connects properly.

Her feet look very strange because of the odd-looking shoes. Why are the tips so long and curl up like that?

Her proportions are also a bit odd, but it’s a matter of subjective taste. You might like really tall, big-framed amazon women.

Aesthetically, I find her clothing a bit garish and crass, but that’s also a matter of subjective taste. I can appreciate sexiness completely, but I think sexy can be tasteful too, and my own subjective taste for sexiness is something less flashy.

And finally, what was your intention for this image? What were you trying to express/convey? What does this image say about you as a human being?

#3

Thank you very much for your reply, I hope to get such detailed comments, I will try to improv.

#4

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