Looking good already.
Clean topology too!
Only crit it that there is something wrong with the eye. It kind of doesn’t look like a sphere. Also the shape from the outer part of the eye is not so correct. Especially the top arc.
Then you might try and measure some parts of the face to get the feeling of the scale in your scene. I think the sphere of the eye is too big. In theory, it should be around 1 inch.
But it’s not exact science right.
cheers and keep it up