Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Jorge Lescale Muciño


#381

dude … it’s turning out well… awesome!

just one issue that’s bothering me is the smoke trails at the back - they look like 2d images with a beveled edge. Should be more volume like you’ve done with the clouds…

otherwise, a strong entry … mind blowing!


#382

Yorch La Escala,

I’m amazed and very proud of you!

Beautiful sky and very nice job with the compo!

By the way, I have some suggestions, as always :scream::

╠═ The temple in the left is too pink and bright… it drives your atention there… I would prefer it a little more orange and maybe with some foggie effect cause of the distance/air density…

╠═ I’m back to the soldiers’ subject again… I would like more constrast in there… would be great to add a back light (you know at least 3 or 5 lights) just to add a glow in the corners of the geometry, just enough to separate them from the ground…

╠═ And, about the foreground/background… In your place I would make a fog effect as the objects go away, and maybe put a little blur effect in the background.

My best wishes to you & your master piece!!!


#383

Climax.-

Thanx Omar :slight_smile:

Lemog.-

OK sir…nice advice…ill fix it…thank u!

DimitrisLiatsos.-

Hey Dimi…ok ill make more discret the sky…thanx for the support man:)

arturro.-

Thanx man…im hppy u like it…

Virtuoso.-

wooo!:beer: yeah tequila!..mine with out whorm please!..lol…hey good luck to you too my friend… and thanx again for you kind words…i ll be updating today later the final one i think…ill be waiting yours man!

3dRaven.-

It must have been tough painting a sky at such high resolutions

oh yes …machine turns a bit slow after some strokes… but i like the result…thanx for be here…final one later today i think

Versiden.-

Oh…hi…yes i think youre right…ill be fixin that …im going to make the smoke thinner at the end…like the first smoke colum…(left/right order) What do you think?
i made the smoke with afterburn…but if i set them less transparent they seem like rocks…i hope i can do it well…thanx for the advice man…

mosconariz.-

hey dude… thanx for your words … and for the nice advice…is always useful…
ill be fixing those things friend…cya later today with the final one…

                                                   :love:

#384

I think the smoke furthest away should be thinner… but I leave it to you to create the master plan. Moreover the size is the volume and density it needs…

you’re almost finished,3 days is more than enough


#385

Hello rattlesnake! Is it done? Ahm? Come on! :slight_smile:
Excellent job!


#386

heres my final image…i made some corrections to it…i made some changes to the smoke…and depht of field…also contrasted a bit the warriors…but didnt changed the lights…added some fog in certain points…but not too much…put closer the transport ship so it looks better now.

very sightly changes that help this image to look better…thanx to all you advice


#387

hey all…i just wanted to say that this been a very nice ride with all of you…i want to thank u for your support along this challenge…the encouragment and words of wisdom were really helpfull to finish this one in time…

i have learned a lot of things from great artists and friends…and will be great if i see you in the next challenge…

i had meet new friends and share this new experience with old friends from other battles and i had an incredible time with you guys!!

so Good luck to everyone with your works…all of them desrve an award because the extraordinary effort you made! so these are for u…

:thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:

Thanx…

…your friend…Jorge Lescale …

fell free to contact me > jlmlescale@yahoo.com
or via pm…

cya soon mates!

keep rockin


#388

Well Done sssssnake … and the crowd goes wild…OLE…OLE…OLE :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:


#389

Ooh…exquisite…cheers on a job well done!

:buttrock: :beer:


#390

My congratulations mate! You made it, and it’s good:) Great colors and mood. You can calmly wait for the voting now


#391

Bravo you finished it.

:thumbsup: Gotta love the ship being shot down :thumbsup:


#392

A big :applause: wonderful image and well done, congratulations Jorge !!! :thumbsup:

jdd


#393

Good pic, very good pic, i like the ambiance with the “sepia color”, good work, good luck for the end


#394

Nicely finished, great job. Wish you the best on the voting.


#395

what great coloring you put into this my friend…such a mood to the whole image very pleaseing to look at…I am happy for you that you finished,and early…hehee,congrats man… :applause: :applause:


#396

CONGRATULATIONS JORGE!!!

You DID IT!
WONDERFULL FINAL IMAGE!!
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:
It has been an unforgettable journey
I hope we can do it again next time
:beer:


#397

Great to see your final, sssssssssssnake!!! I hope you’ll do well with it :buttrock:


#398

Far beyond hoping I “Know” Jorge the snake will “Rock” the house as always…:buttrock:

…I look upon your work/art Jorge and can just smile at what I see…A one man workhorse team…All this in three months and not on a full time basis?WOW! Impressive…There’s enough here to fill a museum…And to match the quantity the quality is here big time…:thumbsup:

…Jorge it’s been a pretty long road,but a very productive one for you.Yet another "Golden feather" in your cap…To say the laest you are one of my favorites,just as you were in the machine flesh challenge…And what makes this even more sweet is the fact you are one of the greatest people around…:applause:

…I will be joining you at the finishline soon (I hope;) ) well…With an hour to spare or so…:wink: …Then we go strong right away with what we talked of…I’ll be contacting you just after I show my final…If I get it in on time or not…well I probably will,I always pull through somehow…:cool:

…Ok then…Congratulations on a excellent and creative and original and very well executed final,from designs,models,textures,lighting,renders,effects,and all that comes in-between…You are the package… talent and class all in one…And certantly one of my favorites…Both here in the challenge and in life as a True friend…:buttrock:

I’ll see you real soon…And again congrats on a wonderful effort and great result…:buttrock: :arteest:


#399

DimitrisLiatsos…

Lol…thanx…your image really deserves an a Ole Ole Ole! …thanx for your great talent friend…a challenge without you is not a challenge:buttrock:

keetmun…

Thanx! im happy u like it mate!

arturro…

oh yes now i can wait for voting…to be honoest i dont give a dam about it…what really matters here is to learn and share knowledge and a great time with all of you…:thumbsup:

3dRaven…

thanx friend…

jddog…

im glad u liked the image… thanx for your big support

MDN67…

thanx for your good wishes…and for your words

ace4016…

thank u …

essencedesign…i had my doubts about change the mood of my scene but im happy u like it…now i can stay calm…thanx for your support on my thread mate…and good luck with yours:thumbsup:

Climax…

Yeah Omar!!..we are going to meet again for next challenge u can be sure of that!

JamesMK…

thank u man…i still want to see yours…:deal:

Virtuoso

Thanx a lot Michael…u know your words really mean a lot to me…reading these words really make me happy…ill be looking forward to see your great final image…i bet youll be able to finish it and it will be one of the most interesting images here…cos u know your talent goes much far than 3d artist…youre a very creative person…u always come with lots of great and fresh ideas that make :drool: everyone…

Then we go strong right away with what we talked of…I’ll be contacting you just after I show my final

ull show that final mate i trust ull do… and of course we are going to talk about our plans…i cant wait…

cya friend…the force is with u !


#400

Jorge…You got it…And again…excellent in all departments.Congrats again to you on a excelent final…See you real soon jorge the rattlesnake…:beer: :beer: :beer: