I agree about the forground, Very nice image thou, great detail and a epic feel.
Ryan
Grand Space Opera 3D Entry: Gerardo Damian Barbero
Dark_Drako
#223
The sky is a little to bright, I think you should atleast make the upper sky a little darker, to add some contrast, the scene is very bright.
koyima3
#224
nice with the corrections you made it really looks amazing , but one final comment from me just put more detail in the clouds and thats it your scene will win ,good luck:thumbsup:
mistermac
#225
Looking very good, lots of details to take in 
The added depth cue to teh mountains helps but maybe a little on the city might help push the balcony forward? I just felt the left hand side blended with the city a little. It’s pretty minor though, the image is complete as it is. Well done.
13 hours rendering eh? I’m dreading my final render time. Good luck.
ihamid
#227
an incredible scene u got there!amazing!:)
. i have a thought…i think the midground buildings are a little over exposed.but its nice!
Smooth-Criminal
#228
thanks to all for the comments and crit. i working on this modifications, i plan to put an update more late, and the final image i hope… will be upload tomorrow. cheers!!:bounce:
MDN67
#231
Really, it’s a very very great and great pic, is not a joke , this this i thinks, i m not a specialist of 3d i prefer the 2d ( i learn but it’s so hard used the logiciel), but in all the pic of the 3d challenge, it’s one of the best pic, the city, the sky, the characters, the general color and the fantastik lighting, all elemnts are beautifull, i like really this pic, she’s fabulous, very great work i hope your will be one of the best at the end judging ( excuse me for my terrible english)
arturro
#233
Wonderful! super! but one crit:) I think that those taking off dropships as well as the one in the air, near the mountain, should have a fron parts lower than back parts. I think that is the way they would take off and fly. But if you don’t have too much time leave it as it is. I’m with ya, and wait for voting:)
Smooth-Criminal
#234
leho,sinaris,MDN67: thanks, tomorrow is the day, i finish and i am going to update the history and put a title. cheers!!
Arturro: i make the change, i rotate a little de 2 ships of the right part, only a little, ( retouching in photoshop) it was not possible to make other render, the left ship I left it without changes, i think the ship take off vertically and one inclines a little to advance, thanks for the crit. men. Cheers!!:bounce:
mmoir
#235
Hey Gerardo,
This is an exceptional image , I really like it you did a great job. The only crit I would have is the city/foreground is a little too monotone in color. Unless of course this is what you were after.
Anyways wonderfull image.
Mike
Smooth-Criminal
#239
THE ARRIVAL
The prophecy says:
the 5 day of the ninth era, will come from the north, quiet between clouds to
demand the Earth, the air and all living being.
I supreme leader of skarhs, civilization of great constructors of magnificent artists, powerful
warriors, I guardian of sacred writings now can see it with my eyes.
Some go away with the hope to escape other that they do not want to accept the destiny try to stop
the inevitable.
During thousands of years this day has been announced, but few made case, this it is my last day, everything what it surrounds to me will disappear, but that ours espirit could not be destroyed by any force and our legacy it will not be extinguished because what we lived during this time nobody
can take off.
Well this is all, first that nothing a BIG THANKS!! TO ALL !!
for the help, crit, and comments I have learned much in this challenge
was an amazing experience for my, i want to wish the best of luck for all the participants.
ok this is not a good day for my civilization but for me it is a great day , because today beginning my vacations, were many days of little sleeping!!
I think that with more time the image could be improved, I apologize by those modifications that they suggested and could not to implement. and sorry about my english I hope to improve it in the
future!
THANKS AGAIN, AND GOOD LUCK TO ALL!!
Smooth-Criminal
#240
THE ARRIVAL
The prophecy says:
the 5 day of the ninth era, will come from the north, quiet between clouds to
demand the Earth, the air and all living being.
I supreme leader of skarhs, civilization of great constructors of magnificent artists, powerful
warriors, I guardian of sacred writings now can see it with my eyes.
Some go away with the hope to escape other that they do not want to accept the destiny try to stop
the inevitable.
During thousands of years this day has been announced, but few made case, this it is my last day, everything what it surrounds to me will disappear, but that ours espirit could not be destroyed by any force and our legacy it will not be extinguished because what we lived during this time nobody
can take off.
Well this is all, first that nothing a BIG THANKS!! TO ALL !!
for the help, crit, and comments I have learned much in this challenge
was an amazing experience for my, i want to wish the best of luck for all the participants.
ok this is not a good day for my civilization but for me it is a great day , because today beginning my vacations, were many days of little sleeping!!
I think that with more time the image could be improved, I apologize by those modifications that they suggested and could not to implement. and sorry about my english I hope to improve it in the
future!
THANKS AGAIN, AND GOOD LUCK TO ALL!!