Go!Taiwan!


#1

Hi all.
I try to mix Taiwan and Egypt two style and culture in this work.
And I want to make happiness feeling to talk people that Taiwan culture is diversification and very exciting.

But it seem have some problems,maybe is color,composition,anatomy or other that I can’t find them problems.

If you can help me, I will be grateful to you! : )


#2

The biggest problem you have, is the white glow behind her, and the vivid colors in the background are brighter than the figure, so they are more important to the eye - they draw the viewer away from the central figure. The color composition should be opposite - the figure should have the brightest colors, and the background more muted.


#3

Thank BillyWJ =)
But I can not understand the white glow’ problem,if you can tell me detail that I will be very happy!


#4

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