Garage


#1

Hey Jeremy here my garage so far it a w.i.p. just want to see what you think. Here the same shot with a occlusion pass add to it.


#2

The first image looks pretty good. I think you’re using far too much bump mapping, you could turn that way down on some of your textures. The road surface looks like something other than a road, I’m not sure what the texture is based on. Try to get more variety in the color and tone of different parts of the scene, colored illumination from the colored sign, a bigger difference between the outside at night and the inside of the garage. The inside could be bathed in light compared to the outside. Some occlusion could help the image look more solid, too.

I can’t figure out what you’re doing on the right image. Whatever effect you’re using that makes the neon go black, etc. - don’t do that.
-jeremy


#3

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