"Fragile" animated short film WIP

#1

Hi,
I’ve just turned 17 and working on “Fragile” in my free time, next to going to school ;).
You can see a preview version of the film here onvimeo
As I’ve never done any animation before I would be very glad If you had any suggestions how to improve it… I hope you like it!

Cheers,
Ramon

#2

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