Not sure what you’d call this, apart from crap/rubbish/lame etc obviously. there are several aspects I’m not entirely happy with but I would love some critique to see if what stands out to me is the same as what stands out to everybody else.
Basically I walk to work/home past this alleyway:

and one day a kind of scene occured to me, so I took a picture on my phone, got it into gimp and layered the shit out of it.

Thoughts, suggestions, abuse ?