Feedback on Kimi (First Human Model)

#1

I recently started my first human model and I would really like some feedback on it. Here are some pictures. Thanks in advance.

http://coolinuyashagirl.cgsociety.org/art/maya-kimi-first-human-model-in-progress-cartoon-3d-1372878


http://coolinuyashagirl.cgsociety.org/art/maya-kimi-first-human-model-in-progress-cartoon-3d-1372878

#2

These are the updated final images. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.





Kimi back
Close up of sweater and skirt



#3

Not quite at the expert level in character designing, a newbie myself, however I can say that you’re heading in the right direction in the cartoon proportions.