Hi, me and a friend are working towards making a final year project for University and have chosen to make a short Action / Fantasy film to complete our degree. Below is a synopsis and treatment sheet of our upcoming 3d animated film. Please feel free to critiscise, add or delete to the story as much as possible. any help will be muchly appreciated.
The story is about a male character who is humanoid looking in appearance but is not quite human as such, as he has a power which enables him to be a far superior fighting warrior then actual humans. His home land is now being taken over by a new government/leader/conqueror, (regular humans) and has ordered the elimination of this certain race of people as they are seen as a threat towards the new leadership. We see this character witness the murder of his companion and avenges his death whilst waging a single man war against the force which is destroying his people and homeland.
Ray = Main Character
Carl = Main Characters companion
Ray and his companion have just learnt that a new world order/force is taking control of the region they are living in by force, they have decided to leave and seek a different place to live, Ray and his companion Carl have just entered an automobile and get ready to leave, Ray looks down to switch the radio on whilst Carl is about to turn the engine on, all of a sudden Carls head slams forward onto the steering wheel after being shot from afar by a sniper soldier. (hidden) Ray is in shock and has blood splattered across his face and glass from the bullet riddled window is still shattering around him
… he gets out and starts to make his way to a cathedral looking building in the distance
Cuts to Black
[size=3][color=white]Ray is sitting on a bench or chair within the Cathedral, as he was just remembering what just happened and knows the army will be after him now. He gets up and makes his way to the front door. He walks outside to discover a number of soldiers aiming their weapons at him
. They begin shooting at him and Ray starts to dodge the bullets at a fast speed and doing so is beginning to eliminate the soldiers by his sword and his hand gun, in a tense battle. (CUE battle scene/ explosions/ noticeable special powers of Ray etc)
Once the army has been eliminated he walks back into the cathedral