Eon (Illustration) Entry: MAURICIO ALVARADO KLADT


#41

Very interesting structures… this last one is the best I think… I would like a mild diversity in the colours of the towers and buildings. just slightly so it can have more interest… but I am sure it is way to early to think of such things. anyway keep it up.


#42

I definately like the most recent version the most, it feels less “brycey” if you know what I mean.


#43

another color proof, and I integrate the chandeliers buildings.


#44

a change in the point of view


#45

Wow very cool work!!! :thumbsup: Really like the colours, textures and the composition is more interesting than the previous versions. I can’t wait to see what more your gonna do!! Good luck!!!:eek:


#46

sometimes makes a world of difference! I like this one much better than the earlier 3D renders. Though I have to say I really liked the line art.

Perhaps you can try having more light spilling out of the tube onto the nearby structures?


#47

testing sky and colors


#48

more color testing


#49

more color pass


#50

I like the colors of this last one a lot. But I also really like the camera angle of the one three back - post #47 - because it could give you a good opportunity to show the curving wall in the background, and really make it feel like it’s a city in the Stone, not just any old science fiction city.
Good luck with it!

-mike


#51

holy cow!

looks fantastic.


#52

i agree with walrus, #47 angle could make a stronger image for my opinion. the new colors are great though and a very unique builiding design!
keep up the good work :thumbsup:


#53

Changing light and color angle


#54

This is great!! I like post #47 much more though. The angle is dynamic, and the lighting is very nice. It’s much more graphic and I’m really drawn to that one. Nonetheless, they all look good, and I look forward to seeing the finish!


#55

I have to dis-agree. I most liked #49 for its warm greens tieing the water to the sky and the more subtle set-off of the flying city-blobs. Turning the camera angle does not accomplich anything valuable. It puts the tube at a bad angle, like its pouring its contents out. In the ‘straight’ cam. angle, it read more like a passage through the picture. Opinion, just an opinion.


#56

Very nice looking scene, this going to be fantastic, I like design very much. Good luck and keep working!:slight_smile:


#57

vas muy bien, estaria bueno que probaras otros encuadres.
busca un encuadre más interesante…y has más evidente la sensación de profundidad… Suerte
:thumbsup:


#58

The angle is the same, but the textures are different, another experiment.


#59

holy cow! :eek: this is turning to be really good! :eek:

love the lens flare man! :love: u certainly changed the entire colour tone! very very cool indeed! :eek:

cheers dude! :beer: keep em comin! :thumbsup:


#60

now working in the details and light.