Environment: Girl in the bathroom

#21

whoah! frameboX… love your work!!:bowdown:

just wondering whether shes going to take a bath(since theres no wet footprints on the floor) or just finished taking one (since you’ve bubbles in the tub):surprised
errr… in any case if shes planning to haf bubble bath… then there should be more bubbles/foam in the tub… then again she may not haf taken her bath yet since she still got her hair tied:shrug: … omg im confuse now:banghead:

what say you guys? :curious:

uhhh… still cant make up my mind but who cares(well maybe alittle) this is a job well done! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

#22

ooh… la la la!!
good lighting!
and i like the tub and water foam!! looking real… how did u do that?
nice image!! :thumbsup:

#23

yea the foam, the water, bathtub looks real good
nice work!

#24

nice work !:smiley:

#25

just as some of you… i was amazed by the foam. looks very realistic - not as the rest of the pic. even that, very good!

#26

Great scene. I realy like the bubbles in the bath tube. Looks great. BTW, how did you make the bubbles in the water?

#27

personally, I think its a bit dark still… a simulated longer exposure time or more faked light bounces, would be better, especially in this environment where you have a lot of photon-reflecting tiles.

I also don’t like the girl… its asif its a picture of a bathroom with a 3D model photoshopped in… the realism levels of the two create a contrast which doesn’t exist in real life, thus it destroys the illusion. (the fabric on the girl could use a micro bumpmap or something… and her legs are too smooth)

But, aside of my ‘critique’, its a very nice scene… and the modelling and light setup is really great, considering the fact that it isn’t done using GI. I couldn’t have done it myself :slight_smile:

#28

i like the bathroom very much and i think that the foam is very realistic because the foam loses its softness when you take a long bath. :applause:

the girl could have better skin and pant textures and the mirror looks too dirty imo.

#29

Thanks to all for your posts. Yes, the girl is the critical point of the image. Many people I showed the image as WIP told me to let her out of the image to achieve a higher level of realism, but for me personally it was more important to have some living content in it than to make another photorealistic interieur-visualisation. And I tried a lot to make her as realistic as possible for me, but my knowledge about characters and skin ist just too low yet.

About the foam: Its nothing special, no displacementmapping, just a map, which I painted based on an foam-pattern in photoshop and combined it in the transparency-, diffuse-, bump and reflexion channel of a raytrace-material. Here is the map, if someone is interested: http://www.framebox.de/creations/3d/bad/foam_bump.jpg
In the final image I made the edge between foam and bathtub in photoshop a little bit irregular, which could have also been achieved by little geometry noise on this edge.

#30

Awesome work, Very well done.
That chick is cool, although if you take the image into PS and increase the levels you can’t see her nipples. You should put them in there.

Other than that, brilliant stuff:thumbsup:

#31

Wow, you need a girlfriend! You really did that?

#32

Hi frameboX,

:thumbsup: Excellent image and I agree with most of what has been said re: the girl and some of the lighting comments.

I would add that some subtle volumetirc light would really help sell the image. Really blow that end of the room up into strong sunlight.

regards

a.

#33

very nice image you have there :buttrock:

#34

I like the girl:eek: .

#35

Very good work!!!
like:love:

#36

yeah looks brilliant. I’d leave out the girl as well.

Sehr schön gemacht :slight_smile:

#37

GREAT JOB! Its good that You did not use GI or FG. You showed your skils in lighing… WOO

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The water is fenomenal… only thing that makes me wander is a girl… Work a bit on her skin , and the “cloths”:slight_smile:
Q

#38

Very beautiful.:twisted:
Really do not know that you how attain
Say the bubble in the bathtub for example, true beautiful.
Great wook!:thumbsup:

#39

Very nice work here! I have to agree with some of the other posters that the girl is the weak link in this wonderful render. :slight_smile: The rest of the image is very nicely done!

Daf

#40

Lowly Bubbles :applause: , wery nice lightning
love it all :love: