Hello, this is my first post in this forum and it shows my latest private work. At the moment I’m interested in certain moods created by indirect and rare light. The image has been one week of work, rendered with mental Ray. The GI-Look is built manually without using GI. I’m looking forward to your comments and critics. You can see a higher resoluted version at http://www.framebox.de/creations/3d/bad/index_high.htm
Regards, Till Nowak
Great scene! Good lighting! And good camera angle!
All I have are two comments:
It’s gonna be more believible if there are wety traces on the tiles and the body. (wet footprints, drops, etc.)
and…the bubble on the water…looks like…last time when I dump Drain™ into my toilet bowl. It should be little more soft and transparent.
But…good work after all!
love it !the light is beautiful, and the BUBBLES, waoooouuuu.
the only pb for me is the skin: too much transparancy or sss, i dont know.
if i have good understand, there is only one light ?
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It’s gonna be more believible if there are wety traces on the tiles and the body. (wet footprints, drops, etc.)
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i dont think the character has actually gone into the bath yet.
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Father, I have sin. I have to confess that I just thought the female body can be more attractive when it’s wet and shins in that wonderful reflected sunlight. 
Moin frameboX,
very amazing, as I say before this is simple “Geil”. You know what I mean;).
@Michas read his text, he say “One Week Of Work”
Very good render. The bathtub with the bubbles is amazing! Very nice lighting, although in some places it could use some tweaking. I think the character kind of takes away from the image because IMO shes not up to par with the rest. Overall, very nice.
Really good image especially if you made it in one week. The bubbles are ok in my oppinion.
thats insane man… only crit is that the chicks panties look kinda rubbery…and its kinda making her look fake which is making her look out of place because everything else is so damn realistic… good job!
so nice mood but . the most great thing is realty in ( water & the mirror ) :buttrock::buttrock:
very nice lighting, lots of lovely subtle details. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise.
Looks great! The only big thing I’d change would be the fill lighting - there would be more fill light from the skylight - some of it would be direct sun that has bounced off the sides of the skylight, some would be light from the sky. It would illuminate the area near the window more, like that bookshelf.
Her reflection in the mirror looks all black, and the back wall behind her really bright - try putting a little kick of light along the side of her in the reflection, some eye highlights and shine on her lips and maybe nose, and toning down the back wall in the reflection. Her hair looks all black in the reflection and direct view - she’s very near a skylight and it would be nice to see some highlights on her hair!
I like how you have added wrinkles to one of the pieces of fabric in the scene, beneath the skylight. That will hold up even if that area gets brighter (it is right under the skylight.) The other fabric in the scene, the towel screen left and the panties, needs a little more work with wrinkles. Spend most of your time on the panties, because that’s where everyone looks of course, but the towel should look natural as well.
Keep up the good work,
-jeremy
i love the way you created the water and the tub…great lights tho i don’t like her very much…i mean she looks kinda plastic…poserlike…
anyway great job!five stars!:bounce:
Very nice background, but the girl need more work, she doesn’t fit the realism of the scene (mod and shafind).
