DWIV - 3D - Ataulfo - RHK 47 War Machine

#21

Hey Iban,

Cool updates :smiley: A really huge war robot for sure :smiley: Cool head design, I lioke a lot! CAnt wait to see more updates! Cheers my friend! :beer:

#22

Matthew : Thanks for coments and sugestion.:slight_smile: I will try to work it less humanoid. :beer:
Fernando: Thanks dude.:slight_smile: There will be updates soon. Cheers :beer:

#23

Hi Ataulfo, this is looking pretty damn sweet. I like all the little details you are putting into this. I have one crit. I would becareful with the red outlines, it might be a bit too busy, maybe try filling in areas solid red? this would help break up some of the busy-ness. But yeah keep going! GO GO GO GO!

#24

Nice designs. I like the last one of the head:thumbsup:

#25

WOW, go aztec this thing looks like a mayan war machine construct!

#26

DTRAN: Thanks for coments and advices. :slight_smile:
Maxter:Thanks :slight_smile:
StefanoDubay:Thanks for coments:)

#27

Body sketch >

#28

Hey Iban,

The armor looks really great :smiley: Like a lot the deploying system for the head on the logo part, cool! Perhaps one arm can be a huge weapon, with out hand, think that in your sketch the hands looks a bit small on realtion with the huge armor, only a comment :slight_smile: Again , great work and looking forward for more updates!! Cheers!! :beer:

#29

Hi Ataulfo

Is a pleasure see your work with all the detail you put in there, I agree with DarkBlueArt, I don’t know if this is because is only the begin sketch but they don’t feel the big size, maybe play with some tiny element to help to feel this, only this comments but definitely is really cool design want to see more, good luck

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#30

The latest sketches look great ! I like Ferx’s idea about a huge gun or cannon for a armor. His head looks awesome tho :drool:

#31

Fernando: Thanks for comments and advices dude.:slight_smile: Now im only sure with the head. Maybe the body, it will be that or something like that. Not sure with legs and arms yet. but he /it will hade a shield and a big armour.:beer:
sadrack: Thanks for comments and advices.:slight_smile: tiny element to help to feel it biger can be a smaller head or hands? or what other tiny elements can i add?:beer:
GregStrangis: Thanks.:slight_smile: Sure i will add a big armour.:beer:

#32

Hey Ataulfo. Great work so far. It reminds me a bit of Shadow of the Colossus. In my opinion I would make his arms bigger. and the head a little bit smaller. He got a “totemic” look that I like a lot.

I put you a link to an image of one of the collosi
http://i3.ytimg.com/vi/R3PRXFLJYcw/hqdefault.jpg

Cheers

#33

Great work Ivan. Your style has improved exponentially since we first met in the Uplift challenge, yet I can still tell that this is so typically you. Very impressive.
Keep it up man!

#34

Hexahedron: Thanks for comments and sugestions. I will do bigger arms. Thanks for the image link.:slight_smile: :beer:

GaeasHerald: Thanks dude.:slight_smile: :beer:

#35

Another sketch. Finding the final body volume. Smaller head and bigger arms.

#36

Now it’s much better. The volume seems really good. Can’t wait too see it on 3D. It’s gonna kick ass.

Cheers pal.

#37

Thanks dude.
:slight_smile: :beer:

#38

Ehehe I dunno how you 3d guys get your head round making something like this! The concept looks very cool… I’d say if anything the head feels disproportionately detailed compared to the body… but I do like the head, so maybe having a couple of other areas on the body that have that amount of smaller detail on them might be a suggestion? You could have a central control panel that is that detailed, or maybe a couple of patches on the arms or knee pads? At the moment it kinda feels like the head was originally bigger and you shrank it down.

Other than that, rock on!

#39

Thanks Zephyri,:slight_smile: . I will work the body with more detail. Now only finding the body final volume.:beer:

#40

Hi, thanks for commenting my entry!
I like your robot, it’s very detailed! Almost a bit too detailed. :stuck_out_tongue:
The logo part, that can open itself up was a nice touch. I get the feeling your robot will be pretty flexible, it looks like it can bend everywhere almost, cool!

Rock on! :buttrock: