DWIV - 2D - Shiramune - Female Norm Invoker

#41

Excellent design, excellent composition and excellent pallette. :bowdown:
No crits at all.

#42

Love ur female character. your stuff keep getting better n better, its gonna kick-ass.

#43

Love your female character. your stuff keep getting better n better, its gonna kick-ass.

#44

Hey man, I’m looking at your stuff so far and it’s just beautiful work. You seem to really bring out your characters’ presence all the time. I probably shouldn’t even bother critiquing you since I have nothing to show (i know, i suck), but anyhow, I feel you can win this thing so here’s my beef:

Last year’s DW winner 2d showed such attitude (the girl) that I really think it grabbed the judges, resulting in a win. I think you showed that attitude in one of your two bigger pinups you’ve posted here (you posted them one after the other in the same post). I gotta say, and don’t kill me since you now know where i live now :slight_smile: , that this composition (April 16 @ 7:22pm) doesn’t grab me as much as that last pinup. I’ve seen your work and I know you’re gonna kill the hell out of it in terms of color, composition, etc., but it’s the attitude that I don’t quite feel with this one. Add a more dramatic chiaroscuro effect to her posture. I may be way off so don’t take it too seriously. Oh and that wolf is BADASSS! And another thing, I don’t know if you’ve tried Painter, but I’m getting these really nice textures that you can try out on your final. I think it brings character to the artpiece when blotches and random other things are there in terms of paint–it makes the art look fast and natural, and makes the artist look confident in their ability to show beauty even with messy areas.

Anywhoo, you’re doing a great job—i can’t wait for the final piece! KIT

-Miguel

#45

Wow what a sexy woman … nice work it has allot of appeal with strong form and a wonderful style . little more curve if you where going to push it I think. Weapon? how about a crystal ball that can bring and take life, one that floats in the palm of her hand and inside a galaxy of power, majestic and limitles but not to compete to much with her presence in the design. Just a thought.

#46

StefanoDubay : Thanks! I thought it was a design that you don’t see everyday so I very much liked the direction of the idea! Unfortunately, her mother statue didn’t make it into the final image. There were too many things going on already within the image.

BaronImpossible : Thank you!~ I’m adding a bit more stuff on the right side of the image to hopefully balance out the image better. I will add more curvature to her body! hehe.

GaeasHerald : Thank you~! I appreciate your kind words~

AlienKing : Thanks~! I won’t let you down! hehe

mlopezart : Yo Mig~! thanks for the compliment and especially the critique! the attitude of the character definitely plays a big part in capturing a lot of people’s attentions, including the judges. So that’s what I’m basically pursuing here. Though the image is still a concept, I hope the final version is more convincing~! hehe. I’m defiitely gonna touch it up with Painter X even though I’m still foreign to the program. So if you have those kickass brushes, I would love to get my hands on them!

QuantumPixel : Thanks~! I’m glad that she’s appealing to you~ the final will definitely have more curvature to her body to bring her sexiness up a notch hehe.

#47

Hi Everyone, Thanks again for your comments and I apologize for my late updates.

These were done few weeks ago, and should have been updated these past two weeks but I was a bit lazy :D.

This is the final concept for Fenrir, her wolf guardian.

This is my final concept done a week ago, so it’s not my latest version. I will have the latest updated tomorrow.

#48

Nice work :slight_smile: The colors are good, but I think the bottom-right character is a bit out of place.

#49

Here’s my latest work on DWIV! I’m working on setting the mood right, balancing out the picture, detailing, and cleaning. I haven’t figured out what her sword is gonna look like! stupid me…that’s what happens when you put off the contest til the end.

Comments and critique’s are welcomed!

#50

This is outstanding! very cool, i Love it

#51

Superb work!!..the rendering is awesome!..I’m not too sure on the perspective for the charactercter bottom right of the image and the creature next to the young lady could maybe work with a small perspective as it looks a little to face on…may I suggest that the creature could be running a long side her or along those lines, something that it looks cohesive…atm…it just looks like 3 seperate elements…but the quality of the rendering is awesome!..

Keep up the great work…

#52

Hey Paul,

Your piece of work is looking very realistic and fantastic. Keep up the good work and hope to see the final result take care for now my friend.

#53

One of the best 2D entry for CGsociety in my opinion.

I like it!

#54

good job! I really like your work, hope to see you around soon. :smiley:

#55

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