DWIV-2D-Gyorkland-Lythorm

#21

hey Gyorkland i really like your model :wink:

#22

Hi Gyorkland. I like his head design very much. He looks very proud. I agree with what has been said. The bird claws of his left arm feel a bit weird. The arm feels too long and it doesn’t flow that well but I do love the feathers. I like the length and size of the gauntlet arm so maybe just keeping it similar to that arm. I feel like the hooves could be more rounded in the front. I think that would give it a better flow. I also think the waist feels really tight like a girdle so try some other options out. Hope that helps.

Keep it going dude!

#23

thanks for the comments and just to make it clear I had NO intention of make him a girdle at first it didn´t look at all as a girdle but I put it some divisions and made it curved so it turned looking like this, as soon as I read this I erased the girdle, and about the arms I get what you all mean I´ll make them mor symetric but I think I´ll keep the claw I was trying to make something like nightmare from soul calibur now that I look at it it do looks too long and thin

ROBOTTANK:thanks about the color blending ,for the final piece I´ll make the painting more realistic but for the model sheet I´ll use strokes to define it better because it has to be monochromatic

BaronImpossible: thaks very much for the comments and about the 2 weeks for you it might look like two weeks but for me is more like 4 days and a half : 2 fryday nights , and two weekends. I´ve been bringing work to home,with luck maybe I´ll get another free night in between but I don´t think so.

Alekzsander: I am glad you like it thanks bro.

fluxen: THank´s man, I also like the gauntlet arm , so I will make the other one more like it the hooves still have a long way to go but I ll keep your comment in mind

thank you all very much.

#24

Hey Jorge,

Really cool updates! The last character looks really great! Agree with BaronImpossible, maybe you can put “eagle” fingers like the right hand of your character on the left hand, and mantain the “metal glove” on it, only a comment :slight_smile: Waiting for more updates! Cheers!! :beer:

#25

Looking good dude better lock it in and move to the final piece! Only about a week and 1/2 left :surprised

#26

I didn´t though I was gonna make it but I did, my elbows and wrists are burning , I am not too proud of my model and concept sheet but I had to do all 3 pieces on this weekend , I haven´t slept in 2 days well basically the whole weekend was expended only on the final piece so thats why the others didnt came out so well I also had to do some speed paint for the final paint on you can see it on the turtle shell and on the background so it didn´t came as I expected it but I am ok with it cause I pulled it out in a very very short period of time tough I just noticed that the claw hand is kind of hard to read but what the hell,
the thing is that a week later after I joined this year war I was asign at work to do other stuffs beside my regular tasks, so I´ve been bringing work home almost every night,
at least the raised my pay check, jeje , well I´ll post the final Image to see what you think

#27

looking good! I am pretty stoked about this comp, and to see how it turns out!

#28

thanks cptcrandall, there are lots of great entries this year is going to be very tough

#29

wow. the colors are awesome on this.outstanding stuff

#30

thanks farazmobin I am glad you liked it, by the way do you guys can see my previous concepts? cause I can´t and I am worried about it please tell me so I can upload them again,
I use a free image hosting website called “freeimagehosting.net” pretty original name huu? please could you recommend me something better cause I am always having this kind of issues
thanks

#31

Hey Jorge,

Congrats on your finsh my friend, yo did it again :smiley: The final image looks good, like the “ethnic” style for this war lord character! Good luck !! (no tequila for this time, I´m drinking tons of tequila and dont finish my concept :sad: , no more tequila… :surprised)

P.S. Gosh, I opened the third page of this thread and deserve a tequila… hahahahahahaha, sorry :hmm: :smiley:

#32

Thanks Ferx last weekend was a living hell, I am glad I could make it but I don´t know if I´ll be as lucky as the last year on qualifying to the next round, this year is really tough and I haven´t improove my skills too much since last year because of the lack of practice I´ve made my research and I ´ve found more than 50 2d awesome. entries but anyway, the important is that I had fun, not as much as last year but it was great too
looking forward for the second mini challenge.

#33

Nice final :slight_smile: Good choice of colors.

#34

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