DWIV-2D-BarryXu-Cyborg

#1

Good luck to everyone, I decide to join the cyborg of machines. Have no name yet, I’m not good with that~

Here is the story I want to go with:

[left]The last war left countless war machines and bodies in the sea. However, they did not die because of silence. For a long time, Grievances grows.The the micro-organisms of the seabed and machinery wreckage gradually integrated into a giant mixture. Their not only have a strong destructive power, but also have the ablity to reorganize the molecular structure of the things they touched, make them rigid and gradually integrate the surrounding environment and become a member of them! They have no concept of justice, only know to eliminate all things confrontation. They are just the grievances parts of the cursed soul, people hope they will rest in peace after this war.

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Thanks, C&C are most welcome!
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last concept

#2

Updated, I add a horn, comprised of the grievances of ghost

#3

I am thinking to change my idea. I try some new sketches today, can’t decide which to take. It will be really helpful to hear some comments, thx!

#4

hey there bro, finally got around, wanted to for some time now. I-ll go with 6 and 2, I also already saw some working on a girl with 3 snake things behind her so be careful with that, there are so many entries it almost impossible to know. p[personally I would stick to the first design you did in color I have no idea what it is but it looks weired and original, the shape is cool. anyhow get to work cuz times a ticking, see you soon! :smiley:

#5

live2contage, thx for your visit, it really helps. The reason I want to change the design, is because it just like a huge sea snake. You can’t do too much facial expression on a snake. I need to add some human like things, so I can do the facial expression.

In the sketches, I myself like the 6, and also like the feeling of my first desgin, so I will try to combine both of them

#6

Hey man,

Some of the thumbs are hard to read, but six definately looks like it could work, though you did take the time to put extra detail into number eight, which would imply you are a bit attached to it. Explore them some more, loosen up with your line and you’ll have a handle on it in no time.

#7

Thx, jushra, here is a developed vorsion of six, but I think it’s not that good. So I “loose my lines” and tried some more today, now I feel good about 4. 5 and 8 are not bad too. May 11th is about to come, I have to work mucher harder :slight_smile:

Good luck to everyone!

#8

combine the 4 and 8,and my first design

#9

updated. changed a little

#10

Hey Barry,

Really nice sketches, and the concept is very original, I like a lot your idea :smiley: Good luck and waiting for more updates! Cheers!! :beer:

#11

The last sketches are so good. I really like them. Keep going in this way:thumbsup: So original concepts.
I wait for your updates.
Cheers:
Alireza

#12

I love the way your going very original and incredible imagination. If I were you I would start wrapping things up though, time is really running out and the final illustration is where you really need to focus, I think this last idea is solid enough to run with, all the best bro, your doing great :beer:

#13

Ferx:thx for your support!
ario:thx! glad you like my idea
live2contage:thx for your visit again, bro,if I could say that :slight_smile: u are right, I have to hurry up! However, I will still change my idea if I found a better one. But right now, it’s good enough. C&C are still very weclome!

New update today. I want to make it transformable. In the water, it’s a fish, but out of water, it become a dragon! So it will be very powerful both in or out of the sea.

One problem, I’m still not sure, whether to combine a human into it, and put details on that human, or just make it a monster like thing, and put details on the head of the snake.For I see, the top pieces in DW III all foucas on the human like thing(no matter what gene). So I’m warried a huge animal like monster is not welcome to the judger?

#14

updated.
Changed my idea a little, I add a huge eye as the main unit. Actually the eye is composed by the ghosts left by the last war, I will try to render that later.

This may be my final composition, details are still absent. And I’m trying to find a feeling of machine, I have to say, I’m not good at that ~

The very thing Im really worried about is time, so I have to hurry, hurry, hurry


#15

updated. I add a face to the mouth to make it a whole creacture. Now she has face and eyes, though they are far from each other :slight_smile:
Still havn’t decided the color.

#16

Awesome concept. I really like the way it expands. Cheers! I think for the challenge it should has the face but I don’t like that! In my eyes the concepts without face had the most cyber personality and were more robotic. I talked too much!
After all the face is so pretty and good for the machine you made.:thumbsup:
Good luck:
Alireza

#17

new update, I’m trying to make it more horrible :twisted: , and I changed her main weapon is soundwave

#18

oh yeah, this is looking great I would wrap it up and start working on your seets and final ilustration, your concept is solid. go go go!

#19

Go Go Go! I like the new weapon my friend.:thumbsup:

Cheers:

Alireza

#20

new update. no time left ,I wish I could have four hands :cry: