Loukor: Thanks for your feedback man.
ā¦this will be improved in sculpting stage later.
ManiacSoul: Gracias y mucha suerte con ese trabajo!
Ferx: Thanks for your encouragement, I really apprecciate it!
DWIII - 3D - Maxter - Tlaloc
Maxter
#21
Ferx
#23
Hey Fabio, looks great. I like a lot the chest design, really original, cool. One thing, more a wish than a critic :D, the spikes on the head perhaps can be in an out angle (dont know , 45Ā°? :D) for a more agressive head, only a wish 
Great work my friend !! Cheers
digiboxoffice
#26
Hi Maxter, few critiques from meā¦
your last render looks alot like coat-stand. Shoulders are realy weird, too sharp maybe.
Whole cloak thing seems like itās been turbosmoothed 3/4 times. And falloff map doesnāt look so cool either, try to fix it with lights.
Characters nose extention looks kinda funny, figure out something with it 
Sorry for harsh critiques - no harm intended just trying to help out:)
Best of luck!
Maxter
#27
These are hard crits for a base mesh in progress! This is just a base mesh showing the overall shape, not a finished modelā¦ lights, materials and smoothing are just ways to show progress in modeling stage.
Anyway, I will have in mind your comment about the shouldersā¦for the next stage, thanks!
kenzoabeki
#28
I really wanna see this finished. The the upper body looks nice, but I really wonder how you are going to define his legs and stuff. Itās a good work indeed.
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Maxter
#29
Thanks Kenzo, Iām glad you are liking my character! ā¦now Iām working on body stuff, so Iāll post some of those soon!
Ferx
#30
Hey Fabio, really great work!, I like a lot the armor on Tlaloc cool design on it. The hands looks awesome and dangerous My only comment is about tlaloc shoulders, i think are a bit large on relation with the armor shoulders (but looks nice ) Superb work !! Cheers my friend and ready for the aguradiente and tequila !!
Maxter
#31
Iām trying to improve a bit the handsā¦ here is a new design for the forearm, now itās exposed, please let me know your opinon about thisā¦
Maxter
#32
Many thanks for your kind words, Fernando! ā¦ I was not very happy with the hands and I worked a bit to improve them, I hope these looks betterā¦
Art2
#34
Very cool concept sheet Maxter!
I really dig the weapon, looking really cool. Bit of a shame you drew the weapon as seen from the top, I thought at first it was some kind of spear.
Good idea to expose more of the of his forearm. Is the yellow going to be bone too?
You could try and see which part of his body you could expose more. A bit more bare bones would look cool I think
Ferx
#35
Hey Fabio, wooww really cool improvement on the hands and arms. The spiral style bone around arm, looks awesome, i like a lot that idea , great :D. The final concept sheet looks great, and i only waiting to see your final render for Tlaloc (you are close my friend! ) Cheers!!
Maxter
#36
Art2: Hey thanks man, initially, I had thought in a staff-class weapon, but I changed it to this one, a bit more agressive artifact weaponā¦now Iām working in this modelā¦about the forearms, yes, all the yellow color parts will be bone. Glad youāre liking it:thumbsup:
Ferx: I hope to finish it in time too, deadline is fast approaching and there is still some work to doā¦ Thanks again my friend, for all the support!
