DWIII - 2D - Jassar - Nardeeb

#81

Action fictitious brother jassar

Very great :thumbsup:

#82

Thanks Alsweedy :slight_smile: . still workin so all notes are welcomed.

#83

Hi Jassar, great progress, like the weapon a lot too. He’s a cool concept.

#84

This is coming along nicely. One thing you could improve in this image is the lighting. Right now he looks colored, but not like he is in an environment with different lights effecting the different materials of his body and armor. Maybe you could push the yellow rim lighting from the sky more, and let some of the forms sink back into shadow, then reveal them with the red glow from the weapon.

I also agree with Walrus about having a look at the legs. The weapon is creating a bit of an odd tangent with the right foot. I think the pose would look more dynamic if he were rotated a bit, but not so much that he is off balance. It looks a bit like he is about to leap backwards, as if to dodge something. If that’s the case, you could play with the pose to communicate that more clearly. If thats not the case, why is his right leg raised? These are just minor quibbles, overall it looks really great!

#85

Thanks for the comment Robert :slight_smile:

zberry, I see your point, thanks! i will do my best and fix things around.

Cheers!

#86

ٍAn update after working a bit more on the lighting and shadows…

Comments are welcomed folks :slight_smile:

#87

Ok, so I guess I’m done with my entry ( just need to know what you think ), I might fix some things before submitting it :slight_smile:
Here they are:

Cheers!!

#88

Updated the first post :slight_smile:

#89

Ok, I did the final adjustments and tweaks ( finaly! ), you can see them on the first post.
Cheers!

#90

Hey Jassar, really cool concept. I like all of your work, really great! :slight_smile: Perhaps on the model sheet you need to draw a side view only for the arms. Like a lot the concept sheet and the final image, awesome work my friend. Congrats!! :beer: (time for beers and tequila shots :D)

#91

Hey Ferx! thanks :slight_smile:
*** I’ve added the arms***

#92

nicely done~ good job

#93

nice final. congrat. :thumbsup:

#94

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