DWIII - 2D - Jassar - Nardeeb

#21

Nice going Jassar!

I think he can use some more wolf like features.
Maybe a slightly longer snout and a wolfs nose.
Also an idea is to give his legs the anatomy of a wolfs leg (walking on it’s toes) and not humanoid.

#22

b looks badass… great stuff.

#23

Great stuff you have here my friend… nice going man :twisted:

I like the expression on his face … nice posing also ^^
those armor give him nice evil look too

but, i think there is something missing here ! … where is the left leg ? :curious:
also the left arm form need more attention …

For the weapon try other shapes you will come across something more interesting

Keep going like that :thumbsup:

#24

Art2, good points. I will change his legs and see what happenes.

samarcbz, thanks man :buttrock:

phoenix, hey man thanks! these are just initial draft sketches, that’s why I didn’t focus much on his other leg and arm ( his other leg would be almost like the other so why bother with it? )
I will draw both of his legs in the final sketches of course :smiley:

Cheers!

#25

try using bones for armors… I thing it’ll work well for this character :smiley:

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#26

Yeah I guess I can make some iron parts of his armor shaped as bones :slight_smile:

#27

Color test #1:

#28

no comment …

very very nice …

#29

man your style is rock! :bounce:

is this is a draft also :arteest:!!!

#30

I love your character and your style of drawing/painting I can’t wait to see more.

#31

Many thanks guys :slight_smile:

phoenix, yes this is also a draft/ color test. I might change some colors and see what happenes.

The toe’s armor is bugging me a bit and i will change those too ( it’s damn hard giving small toes a decent looking armor :scream: )

Cheers!

#32

Reminds me of the Tauren race in WOW, but I like the design, keep up the great job!

#33

SashaP, thanks.

More sketches:

another hair-style test ( more to come )

#34

Awesome, nice details, looks real cool:thumbsup:

#35

hey man … you participated here at last, nice to see your submission around :slight_smile:

I didn’t know yet what exactly the competiton talks about … but your work here is a strong piece my friend …

just wanted to say hello, and wish a greet luck this time :slight_smile:

-Yusuf

#36

Your concept is badass. Very little to crit. I was just staring at your pic and wondering what seemed out of place. The wolf is green. Not saying this is out of place though, just a nice change. You should retain the old armor around the legs because it just fits nicely with the whole grundge feel. The new one makes him look lankier. The new hair IMO is better because it makes him seem more regal. Post more soon!

#37

I agree with StacyOgie about the hair; it looks good. You don’t see many characters with braids, so keep working that angle.

#38

madshooter, thanks :slight_smile:

maxspider3000, can’t wait to see u aboard too!

StacyOgie, yes I gave him a greenish hue to have something new, and to show how strong the orc-wolf blend really is.

Swizzle, true! I liked him with braids… he seemed more evil :twisted:

more sketches coming soon!

#39

Suh-weeet like an apple !
Dude the color test passed with flying … wince colors.

You really made him look-n-feel like a wolf-orc hybrid (don’t wanna ask about the family tree tho…).

I’m tempted to say that you should still make the snout more canine (pointing up and outwards), but the face right now is an important, constant reminder of his orc-blood.

I think with the decorations and hair and stuff, you can get the wolf-aspect going quite nicely too.

Shoulder pads : I really liked the ones on his left shoulder in the pencil sketch. Makes it feel more tribal, and suggests that he makes them out of creatures he’s overcome in battle.

Oh, right : Battle! Dont forget scars !!

Legs : Maybe just add some hair on the lower parts of the leg, like you have on the elbow. But more.

Its gonna be a good one! :thumbsup:

#40

LavenPillay, very good points! I will keep them in mind :slight_smile:

I caught a nasty cold and I’m a bit shaky and dizzy :sad: but I’ve managed to do another sketch :slight_smile:
---- a side view…

I like the metal spine thing, it’s been on my mind for too long :rolleyes:

Cheers!