DWIII - 2D - Bluefley - WIP

#21

Sick concepts! no crits , great stuff :smiley:

#22

my favorite concept so far!! wait to see more!:bounce:

#23

I realy like your stile. Great pen work and design. I will bookmark your thread. Keep up with the great work.

#24

wow great concept drawing! really like the character! and artifact idea!
about the second sketch, did those proportions get out of hand or is she supposed to have those big legs?
looks kind of oddā€¦ if sheā€™s supposed to have very long legs, perhaps make them thin and two-kneed (even though two-kneed legs are a bit common maybe :07).
in any case thing with one-kneed legs seems like you need the upper body to weigh you forward in order for the movement not to throw you off balance backwards so such a small upperbodyā€¦ and then wings as airresistance (if she runs at all when she can fly :P)ā€¦ so if she flies the legs might seem a bit impractical aswell with their weightā€¦
that vague sketch of one of the minions looks great!
great hopes for this entry! :slight_smile:

#25

Very nice starting point, looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I really like your painting style on your other work.

#26

itā€™s good to see ur WIP work of DMIIIā€¦like always, ur design is great. really thanks for ur post in deviantart.com of the news of this DMIII competition. without it i wouldnā€™t know theres a great competition going on =)

i agree with erik_jā€¦ the long leg seems not really suited to the figure. it makes the whole body structure look unbalance. maybe u can add a bigger armor for the upper torse? just a suggestionā€¦ anyway keep the great work!

#27

Really sweet concepts so far. Canā€™t wait to see the progression of your character and her minions.

#28

Neat, it great to see someone brave enough to do a female in this comp. I think to make her more imposin, you make her head smaller, enhance the back more, I still like her pixie face even though you can make her more powerful bodily. How about a thin tricle of lavea that connects her to her minions. Kinda like its melted the ground, or erupted from it, she leaves lava prints when she walks, that kinda thing.

#29

one word so far; neat

#30

more lunch break sketches! woo

this time, worked on the minions designs. Still just a rough shape, nothing too detailed, and iā€™m still trying to figure out a way to incorporate the artifact on each of them, might do something else than a skull. One is more of the rock type, the other is more tree-like. Also fixed the invokerā€™s proportion, Im satisfied with how it is right now, only thing left is to define a solid design for her outfit/armour!

crits and comments always welcome!

#31

cool shapes!

Maybe use different body types for the minions.
The tree-like guy could be more slender, Treebeard style.

#32

Amazing stuff!! Nice character and strong concept!

#33

Iā€™m really liking thisā€¦

#34

stone guy body shape a bit uninteresting (great middetail shapes though) and head.
looking great!

#35

thanks for your feedback guys, I kinda wanted to have the 2 similar in shape, different in finish, but I agree the rock one is a lil simple in shape, Iā€™ll make some changes (:

I guess he should be leaning foward like the other one, in a more ā€œsubmissiveā€ pose behind his master. I also wanted to give them so sort of armour/outfit, so once colored its not entirely rock or wood.

oh well, back to the drawing board!

#36

Your drawings are beautifuls, but my preference goes to the first one you posted.
Nothing to say for the creatures, some work to do on it for sure, but really nice concept !

#37

Great stuff Bluefley you have here :thumbsup:

love the conceptā€¦ love the idea and your wip

keep it up

cheers!

#38

After work doodles! Jeez two posts today, Iā€™m spamming the shit outta this thread!

Alright, alternate concept, more metalā€¦dunno which I prefer, guess Iā€™ll sleep on it. You guys tell me what you think!

cheers

#39

Hey Bluefley,
You got a good concept going on here, I like the idea of the two minions. Three characters is a lot to tackle but I just realized your doing for the concept challenge so that is a bit different haha. I got two Im trying to work out and Im doing 3D. I might go back and revise that haha. But anyway, I wanted to say I liked the clothing design for your character in the original two drawings, it seemed more earthy and natural which fits with her beasts. Just my two cents. Cant wait to see how it turns out :smiley:

#40

Sweet work Marc/Bluefly :slight_smile: I really like the style. The two characters have a nice dynamic, keep it up :thumbsup:

PS i prefer the most recent image