I would love some c&c!
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=282&t=741998
<Name>, was the Demon Prince of Suffering, and the ruler of 7 legions of Hells most frightful Demons.
In battle, he was severely damaged, being split into 2 pieces at the waist by a Norm Warlords axe. To save his soul he stole the souls of fallen Norms and Demons that were near his disfigured torso. Using their life force, he temporarily mended his wounds, sustaining his life
for the time being.
The Temporary Seals did not last long, and soon he had to kill more, until he was at a stage of almost constant killing, he is a true killing machine. This has created a huge rift in his life, On the one hand he must steal Norm souls on a regular basis to sustain his Seals, this creates a great need for Norms race to stay alive.
<Name> has become almost a vigilante, killing the Machines for the sake of preserving Norm lives that the machines so threaten. Now being torn apart literally form the inside, the Seals holding less and less each time one is made, he has began to feed on the souls of his own Demon brethren. His soul in anguish, he has, true to his title, become the epitomy of suffering.
