Dialouge shot


#1

Hi,
I am working on acting/ dialouge shot for my showreel.
I have put a lot of work into it and not really looked for enough critique on the way.
Lots of breakdowns between poses. Curves are in linear and single quick passes
for lip synch and eyes.
But there seems to be something missing in general appeal.
Any suggestions before I start refining and polishing would be greatly appreciated.
Many thanks

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6236073/trench_pb.mov

[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6236073/trench_pb.mov[/img]

#2

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