Dialogue Animation Feedback


#1

I sure hope I’m posting this in the right place…

Hello! Thanks for taking a moment. I’m a game animator looking to try and transition into film, and I’ve been working on some of my skills. Are there any vets around who can give me a few pointers on this piece?

https://vimeo.com/292532702

In its current state its unpolished, but fairly fleshed out. Any feedback is welcome. Thank you!


#2

There is no video on Vimeo service: “Sorry, we couldn’t find that page”. Could you reapload it?