Character- Broadsword Traveller

#1

This is something I’ve done with PS. Actual size was 3000 x 3000 at 150 dpi.

Did it for fun though, was thinking about printing it out.

Please C&C.

Cheers,
Yow Chuan

#2

Nice pic but a few crits :slight_smile:

Lightning - Looks abit basic, kind of spoils the depth of the rest of the image.

Lighting - Need some brighter lighting on parts of the character where the lightning bolt would reflect

Other than that nice work :slight_smile:

#3

hey, nice moody piece man, here are my crits (kinda rushed, so i apologize for that)

  • hand waaaayy too small for his body, face and for what hes holding, should be bigger.
    -that handle at the end of the sword, i see no real need for it from a design point of view
  • the main problem, the folds, you have too many that you dont need… not even for the sake of detail because a tad of them are not accurate anyways (remember, less is more!)
    but its a nice job, i can see all the effort put into it, which i appreciate :smiley:
#4

Hehe…thanks guys…Points and suggestions taken.

Will put them into practice on my next piece.

I think my approach of going into detail in the beginning wasn’t a very good choice. Since I was too stuck with the minor stuffs, I complete forgot about the big picture… :stuck_out_tongue: Less is more! Couldn’t agree more with that statement!

Those folds…yah…took most of the time~! :cry:

Thanks alot guys~!!!
Yow Chuan:bounce:

#5

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