Character Animation Demo Reel

#1

Hey everyone,

I have created a new cut of my demo reel with some old and current pieces. I would like to receive any kind of critiques about my demo reel before I send it out to internships.

http://vimeo.com/22614326

Thank you for viewing!

-Jordan

#2

Wow Nice!
I love the zombie piece its really great. Some pieces disturbed me by the character’s lack of eyes, but the acting won me over.
Just 2 comments:

  1. The way she holds the gun - you could have a stagger when he goes closer. Also clean up your hands, I could see a little pop there. Also, when he pushes the gun down, her arm is too stiff (blue), her wrist would point down (red) with the pressure of his hand.

  1. Your eye blinks are too uniform, Its obvious on moom and the little kid. You could try to favor one eye to the open or close position, and use the lower lid control to vary the “lid Line”.

But wow just wow great acting overall. I don’t think that these comments are a deal breaker, you don’t have to correct it and re render if you can’t afford the time.

#3

Thanks, desmondying!

Your critique is really helpful. I still have enough time to polish up my pieces.

-Jordan

#4

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