Butterfly twist blocking - Crit needed


#1

Here’s the blocking stage for my butterfly twist animation. I’m finding Norman hard to pose well because there are quite a few controls, especially the spine. Let me know how you think it could be improved.

Cheers!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tHIfo5Y_ZkI


#2

Hi Giggleoriginal!
Great start to the shot, it has lots of potential.
It seems that everything is a bit fast, so try slowing down your action by a few frames.
You also need to think of your hips (and body) as a ball and make sure that the arcs and spacing/timing work.
I also suggest getting rid of the first pose as it does not read too well and just go straight to the action.

Hope that helps
-Yasha


#3

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