Black Cleopard

[imPTH]

Character Name : Black Cleopard
Race : Elf
Sex : Female
Age : 16
Weapon : Yin Yang Dagger
Skills : Hawkeyes rank S, Quick step lv5, Back stab lv3.

" She is the youngest member of The Great Leopard Clan where the most skillful assassins was born . With her powerful skills, she was the chosen one in Wales King' murder mission. However, Black Leopard was trapped because of there was the double agent in her Clan who had reported about that King' assassination .Fortunately, she escaped in sec with her injured body than their... "

Criticals and comments are welcome
Sorry for my bad English.

[Quadart]

I’m not seeing the images, just two stacked placeholder icons from the image host.

[imPTH]

I’m not seeing the images, just two stacked placeholder icons from the image host.

oh my negligence. sorry
i have just updated the images link .

[Lunatique]

You’ve got nice and expressive brushwork, which is very refreshing to see around here. But make sure you aren’t using it as a crutch or gimmick to hide your weaknesses as an artist.

Your values can be more coherent. Right now, the value shift from the darkest to the brightest on your darker surfaces is far more dramatic than on your lighter surfaces. Even though the amount of value shift doesn’t need to be exactly the same, they should be similar. But of course, surface property makes a difference, such as glossy surfaces being much more contrasty when reflecting light, while more matte surfaces aren’t as dramatic.

[imPTH]

You’ve got nice and expressive brushwork, which is very refreshing to see around here. But make sure you aren’t using it as a crutch or gimmick to hide your weaknesses as an artist.

Your values can be more coherent. Right now, the value shift from the lightest to the brightest on your darker surfaces is far more dramatic than on hour lighter surfaces. Even though the amount of value shift doesn’t need to be exactly the same, they should be similar. But of course, surface property makes a difference, such as glossy surfaces being much more contrasty when reflecting light, while more matte surfaces aren’t as dramatic.

Thanks for the comment. i realize something interesting from your useful post .I will reup the image asap .
Thank so much .

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