Bane / Mr. Fantastic crossover


#1

Hi everyone!
Posting wip of a illustration i’m working on lately. Basically idea is that Bane stole ruber gloves from Mr. Fantastic to do some dishwashing. I’m unsure about the colors, especially skintones. What do you think? Maybe composition could be improved? Thank you for your time.


#2

Bane’s head is cropped off too much at the top, creating unnecessary visual tension that’s pressing down on

Maybe do a quick experiment and have Bane on the right side of the composition and put Mr. Fantastic on the left instead, so Bane isn’t smack in the middle of the composition.