Ball throw blocking - please crit

#1

My blocking for a ball throw animation. Do you think I should add more breakdowns or inbetweens?

Please leave your comments and thoughts below.

Thank you

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HvChKsDSpnk&feature=plcp

#2

Looks good to me, lets see it with smoothed curves.

#3

Double check that the hand doesn’t block the arm when he is tossing the ball up and down around 8 sec.
And double check your reference as the pose at 10 sec looks too off balance and the legs look too straight, also try and push the body arc to get a nice line of action and a clearer silhouette.
Around 11 sec the grey leg looks very Ik-ish and disconnected from the body.

hope that helps

-Yasha

#4

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