B-Movie Entry: Paul Hume


#1

Paul Hume is entered in the “B-Movie” update: View Challenge Page

Latest Update: Work In Progress: Snipergirl


#2

This is the concept I will probably go with. I figured that B Grade movies basically means straight to DVD movies so I reckon a couple of sexy girls with big guns would probably make the grade.

Good luck to everyone.


#3

Nice to see you again, paul. Really like your technique for setting up your characters…

best of luck 2 you.

Marley


#4

Sniper rifle base…less scope and legs (?).


#5

Dang nice rifle


#6

Simplified version of this…Remington something or other…


#7

nice clean gun


#8

Basic pose on the’girls’.


#9

Cool! Those girls have big guns!! :smiley:

-rage


#10

Nice…I like the idea…action girls with guns


#11

WIP on girl #1.


#12

I think the woman has a lot of muscle, perhaps more sensual…
just an idea :thumbsup:


#13

point taken…i had been roughing in tho. I have smoothed the muscles…still need to reduce the right bicep a little.


#14

Update…


#15

Hate to say it, friend, but she`s lookin’ very masculin. Like a man with breasts. Here is my suggestion:

Think of a model or supermodel that reminds you of the image you have in your mind, then google her. You should be able to find a lot of images. Find one with a similar pose that you are trying to achieve, then concentrate on the areas that really accentuate her form, such as the hips, and the way the left hand rests on it, the way the wrist bends, etc. Once you’ve worked on these key areas, then you can focus on the “in between” stuff to bring it all together.

Just a little more work and I think you’ve got it. Keep it up :thumbsup:

-rage


#16

I believe that this is intentional. And it kind of works for B-grade :smiley:


#17

Rage / Juraj,
Thanks for the crits. My original idea was muscle chick thus the masculine look…so here is the same model with a hopefully more feminine look. So I have reduced the mass of the arms shoulders and neck a little…a smoothed out that cleft chin (no idea how that happened :wink: ). Also slightly different angle.

Any thoughts on which direction to go?


#18

composition test…the girl in the foreground needs to be scaled down a little.


#19

and…a test of the whole composition…


#20

Oooops…this one I mean :slight_smile: