B-Movie Entry: Leonardo Silva

#1

Leonardo Silva is entered in the “B-Movie” update: View Challenge Page

Latest Update: Final Image: Voluptuous women eater

#2

well, this is the first aproach to the bmovie challenge, but still lookingfor something more original

#3

this is another idea, nothing to do with the zombie blind date. Just looking for the best aproach to this challenge

#4

this are some options about the VOLUPTUOUS WOMEN EATER CREATURE. Dont know which could work better yet. hope someone can help me to decide.

#5

i think i will continue this concept. Still have some doubts, the zombie blind date seems good too

#6

this is another option for ZOMBIE BLIND DATE.
I’ll have to choose between this one and the VOLUPTUOUS WOMEN EATER.

#7

Yo you gotta do the volutpuous women eater. and not only because I like voluputous women. Great concept.

#8

Hey Leonardo,

Cool ideas man! hahahah love all the concepts :smiley: And nice sketches too.
The Voluptuous Woman eater can be an amazing concept, a great B-Movie hit :smiley: That concept has my vote :slight_smile:

Good luck and waiting for more updates. Cheers! :beer:

#9

some options

#10

other options, any feedback?

#11

very funny :slight_smile:
i like the composition, but the position of women is a bit strange, the legs should be closer to the ground, due to be being drawn into the container

#12

hehehe, nice funny idea :thumbsup:
for me, it seems that in A and D it is more obvious at first glance that the monster has the girl’s boob in his mouth… and it sexier :stuck_out_tongue:

#13

A doesnt make sense, why would she be wearing a dress to go throw trash, B is the sexiest and best for the story. D could work too but i think it helps to show more clothing because then it stands out more that the monster is eating her tits. Composition is too cramped though, you need some more negative space on the side of her head. The image is too left-heavy right now. Props for a great idea.

#14

I really like this one. This is a funny and cool idea! If I were to choose one of the 4, I’d go for “B” but would probably change the color of her shorts. I also like the “A” but like aianimation says, It wouldn’t really make sense. She’d probably take out the trash on that morning before going out and dressed casually.

Anyways, keep it up really looks good!

#15

thanks for the feedback, what do you mean by negative space. I also saw that is a little unbalanced, I was thinking to put the main title on the right to balance a little…

#16

well , thanks to all . I was thinking to continue the D option because i think it shows more skin. But also like the B option (the one on the shirt). About the legs, you are right , maybe y will put her left leg lower.
And the comp need some adjustment too.
Thanks again and more updates to came soon

#17

The B sketch is my fav too. Can’t wait to see your next update, your idea is really nice =)

#18

What I meant by negative space was space where the action is NOT happening. The action in the image is the girl and the monster and they are too much on the left making the image left heavy. See how close her head is to the edge of the image? Feels like it is hastily cropped. An easy fix is to make the image horizontally longer or to move the girl and monster more to the right.

#19

lineart, almost final

#20

i think this is the final lineart. Its time to color