B-Movie Entry: James Quah

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James Quah is entered in the “B-Movie” update: View Challenge Page

Latest Update: Final Image: Attack of the killer mutant “stick”

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I constantly stand in awe at the sheer massive amount of talent and dedication to their art of the forumers here. With some encouragement from my colleague, ive decided to give it a go ,hopping to learn from crits here and have improve myself here! Yes , its 2 girls on a bed and yes…its a mutant “stick” , its a b-movie!!! We must have some sleazzee!!!

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Some color updates.

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finally squeezed some time out for this small update!

#5

Hi, grat concept and the girl is so sexy.
Good Luck!

My B-Movie entry

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Hey James,

Cool idea :smiley: like the design on the image, nice B-Movie vibe on the poster style.

Perhaps you have a bit empty space on the right side of the frame, maybe you can brake it with another girl, or some sticky arms from that sticky monster :smiley:

Good luck and waiting for more updates. Cheers!! :thumbsup:

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Almost there!!! im quite sure im not gonna win…but its great to take part. Personally i feel ive improved as im not very disciplined enough to go beyond anything but doodles previously.

#8

Hey thanks guys! its good to hear some reassurance im not somewhere TOTALLY off!

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Hey James,

Couple of suggestions - I think the colors you used in the previous version fit in better with the b-grade movie theme. The washed out and faded color scheme looked better than the darker colors you have now. Also the red headed girl’s open mouthed expression was better in the previous version.

Keep up the progress and good luck!:beer:

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Hey Mig,
Thanks for the suggestion!Upon closer inspection i think ya really right! ill definately look into it tonight or some last min frantic changes tomorrow night!

#11

Great going mate! Funny idea and nice execution. One more day. Go go go :thumbsup:

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Hi, I think exaclty the same ! some of the details are less visibles in the new version, the open mouth gave her a little “hot girl” effect who was nice^^; but the new is good too, the most important is the color contrast I think, time is running and I know sometimes things can’t be changed.
keep up the good work, you have a realy funny concept^^:beer:

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D:

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humm, sorry the previous was better :smiley:

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Software: Photoshop

2 young lonely girls in a small small town. Only one pleasure for 2. Yet while the quiet little town sleeps, the mysterious power of the cold blue moon transform and mutants the stick into a killing monster. Torn between its love for its former owns and its own carnal lust, what is a monster to do?
Between choosing deadly pleasures and escaping, what will the girls choose? Watch for out the suprise ending!

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