B-Movie Entry: Dennis Allain

#21

I liked the first pose- this one makes me think too much how he got there/what action he has just gone through. Maybe just an angle thing. I assume he backhanded the UFO/ship. If so- probably a minor rotation might resolve it. Show a little more of the robots chest? or the opposite- show the rotation of the swing by positioning(more rotation from hip to shoulder)? Just a suggestion- maybe once you get the background buildings painted/textured- it would bring out the robot more and resolve this as well.

Otherwise… pretty DAMN nice!

#22

Sweet :twisted:
The angle of the train,though (along the Y-axis?) makes it a bit tough to tell it is a train :stuck_out_tongue:
but what do I know, I have zero experience as a giant robot attacking a spaceship.
rock on :beer:

#23

Hey thanks guys… I tell you, I have gone through so many iterations. All good thoughts, I appreciate it. I am starting to paint the thing and will try to take these ideas into account. So much to try to consider… I will have more train pieces falling of the ‘train car club’. What I found was the more chest I showed the less of the forearm/hand holding the train was visible and that started getting weird. I will play with it a bit and see where I end up.
Thanks again!
Cheers,
D

#24

Not sure how much more time I will have later this month so I am going to dive into the painting part of the image and hopefully pull the image together…

#25

Wow, very cool robot!

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#26

good painting!

#27

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