An Ordinary Night

#1

Hey guys, hope you help me with this image below.
This is the initial sketch of the image. Its a very direct and simple, but I believe it will works…

This is how the image is actually:

Waiting your comments.
Thanks in advance.

#2

What are you trying to convey with this image? What’s the narrative? What do you want to express?

There’s no sense of lighting. What is the source of light? What direction is it coming from? What is the color temperature of the light source?

#3

Its a man thats finished his ‘work’. Its something that he is ashamed for but theres nothing else to do besides keep doing his job. ~night after night~
My aim is to maintain the illustration simple, with no more than the details that it needs to show the idea. - but there will be a moon, at the left superior corner, with a yellow-almost-white color - it really needs a light source, thank you for your comment.
I have no idea what color I could use in his hair. =P

Next saturday I’ll update it.

#4

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