Amazing Time Traveling short film..Must Watch!!!


#1

Time Traveling Short

//youtu.be/R7ixFXZJts4


#2

I like the general idea of the film, but there are niggling things that distract from it being a “Must Watch!!!” film. For instance:

  1. When he gets shot in the arm we see blood shoot out, but as he is holding the wound there is no sign of blood on his hand or arm.
  2. When he exits the time bubble thing and starts running, his run is identical to the terminator cop in Terminator 2.
  3. The demon bull terriers don’t sit well in the scene, I think that needs more work.
  4. There is too much going on in the background of some of the scenes. Bins being moved, people walking and cycling casually right behind where there is shooting, time bubbles and demon bull terriers. It’s all too detached from what is going on. Getting in tighter with the camera and a shallower DOF would have helped fix that.