Acting shot preview


#1

Hi people this is the rough preview of acting shot i am doing animation is done render and certain post adjustments like editing left this is just a preview of it ur comments would be valuable

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sv4LnKV4XIg


#2

this is the reference

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HzZwqs3bxic


#3

Hi guys this is an acting shot i have been working on plz would like to know ur comments this is lmost done a bit of polish and correcting head arcs which i forgot…
plz give ur reviews good bad whatever wanna improve it so all critics plus suggestions are welcomed
this is just a preview i would light it give background all render later i wanna know comments of animation

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MtpFvg6_koA


#4

Well,

I would suggest you to work a lot and lot on timing before you get into advanced shots like acting like this one. I personally didn’t feel the line of action working properly from the beginning of the shot - http://johnkstuff.blogspot.com/2006/05/animation-school-lesson-5-line-of.html this might help you, but Google for more. Notice all the weight shifts that the fat guy is making before he even click the button and even after that. Its very very important although you hips or feet might not be seen in the shot. But it adds lot of realism. properly space out the breakdowns according to the timing and then work on the shot. Happy animating :slight_smile:


#5

thanks mate for the reply i have been working on the slimmer one more and i have its orted out now working on timing of fat guy only i am finsing it difficultto give him a proper weight shift dont know why but will try out
And line of action well u are rite i have worked in the slimmer one fat one i will try to do something as he is a proudy and showoff type of guy his power center is chest so its difficult if u have any ideas plz lemme know thanks for ur reply once again


#6

here is the newone and final according to me ur comments are welcomed

http://d.pr/t4Ag


#7

Can’t view file… just youtube it?


#8

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