3D Digital Artists

#61

Hey Rebecca :slight_smile:
I just wanted to show my latest progress on my torso while iā€™m waiting for my friend to come up with this rig of his. Itā€™s still in its very early stages - just trying to get the shapes right.

First torso post

#62

The part where the torso muscles are situated is excellent. The back needs a bit more work, those holes around the centre of the spine are too big. Thereā€™s something wrong about that forearm muscle too, but that one still raw WIP, right?:wink:

#63

orangefisk,

Holy supercoolness Batman! That rocks! I think Iā€™ll wait til youā€™re a bit further along to ā€˜critiqueā€™ this ~ as I know things change fast in ZBrush. Why not get it as far ā€˜doneā€™ as possible, then Iā€™ll see if I can find flawsā€¦hmmā€¦

Thanks for posting this, itā€™s awesome! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

#64

Hey :slight_smile:
Update in my thread

Rebecca
Iā€™ve just been playing a bit with the model this morning before iā€™m off to work. It would be great if you had a look at the model when itā€™s less wip. Just wanted to follow up :smiley:

Chikos
Hey thanx man. Yes - itā€™s super bigtime wip. More updates will follow in my thread

#65

Hey orangefisk,

No problem, Iā€™ll try to get to it today if I can :slight_smile: ~ itā€™s super cool to see this stuff, feeling happy! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

#66

orangefisk,

Just a really brief reviewā€¦so far, looks great, just a few minor tweaks which I would recommend to improve this cool model:

[left] [/left]
[left]Gotta run, but feel free to post more images as you update your work ~ look forward to seeing the finished model! :)[/left]

[left]~Rebeccak[/left]

#67

Hi Rebecca - oh man, cool, thanx for the paintover. A sad thing though, is that i had to remodel most of the mesh because of sloppish work when i first made the base mesh. Oh well - I still got some quality time in company with Z :slight_smile:
I tried to incorportate some of your suggestions in this update.


(Linket to a bigger picture)

#68

orangefisk,

Ah! I kind of figured this might happen ~ no worries! It gives me good practice. :wink: Let me know when youā€™re finished finished, and if you need me to, Iā€™ll be happy to critique your model then.
Looking forward to seeing your results! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

#69

helow everyone, here is mine :slight_smile: feel free to crits :slight_smile:

#70

5awamura,

Wow, COOL! The only things I notice right now are that he has no nipples and that his ears are just a bit large. The legs arenā€™t as refined as the upper body, but whether or not this matters depends on how much you will be seeing the legs. The ankle area is a bit too straight / parallel to look completely organic. His arms may be a TAD short, but since he is a muscle guy, this may seem right. Other than that, yep, this model appears to kick bootay!

<scratching head in an effort to come up with something elseā€¦>

Awesome, thanks for posting this! :thumbsup:

~Rebeccak

#71

[b]rebeccak

[/b]Congratulationson a very intersting thread. Here is something from me then.

The first poly hand I made I followed a tutorial in Spanish. The tute was so well illustrated that language was no barrier. The link to the tute is in a backup somewhere I canā€™t get to at the moment so maybe someone here knows where it is for the community.

Took me bleedin ages to make BTW:thumbsup:

#72

Kanga
Thats a really nice model you got there :). A few more angeles would be really nice, just for me to use as a reference :D, hehe. The tutorial would be perfect, you know - you can never get enough references. You got any other models to share with this cool thread?

#73

Well, Iā€™ve no complaints about this hand ~ itā€™s amazing!

The ONLY thing I would say is that the fingers are too uniform ~ for it to really look like a personā€™s realistic hand, it would have to have little deformities and irregularities to it ~ but of course, a lot of that you can probably accomplish with texturing, too. I would say that if you were going to use this hand for a highly realistic model, to just make it a bit LESS perfect :). ~ But thatā€™s super cool to see! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

EDIT: Good lord, thatā€™s an awesome website you have there, too! :cool:

#74

orangefisk

Thanx man!
Yeah in about a month I will be able to get to the backup where I stored the tutorial so as soon as I can I will post a link here.

[b]orangefisk

[/b]Thanx man, thats a kick butt avatar you got there!
I get the point about irregularities and am trying to get z-brush to work with 3dmax on a full body model and imbalance will help get rid of the plasticy effect. Busy with a lady at the moment,ā€¦ looks like a nice thread to post progress for comment:thumbsup:

#75

Kanga,

Look forward to seeing more of your work! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

#76

The hand is one of the toughest things to recreate, so far youā€™ve done a great job! Please, do post some more screenshots, I would like to see that thumb finger.

#77

Ok here ya go:thumbsup:

#78

Kanga,

Wow! Thank you for posting these! Itā€™s cool to see! :slight_smile:

The one thing I would say about the thumb is that the knuckle looks out of place. I think you have the middle knuckle too high towards the tip of the thumb. But thatā€™s easy enough to fix, Iā€™m sure. Would you consider altering the model and posting a new render?

Great to see all the views! :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak

EDIT:

[color=LemonChiffon]Check out this Reference picture of the skeletal structure of the hand, noting the thumb joints:

http://www.anatomia.ru/specimens/manus1.jpg[/color]

#79

Thanx for the crit.
Will get right on it:thumbsup:

#80

Kanga,

Awesome, thanks for being a good sport! :slight_smile: Look forward to the new renders. :slight_smile:

~Rebeccak