(2D) Ball with Tail (feedback?)

#1

Hey there! :slight_smile:

I made an animation a while back that so far I’ve found to be one of my best, however, I want to know if it could be better in any way.
The criteria was to make a ball bounce twice (at the very least) on the ground and once off the wall. It had to include several of the 12 principals, S&S, overlaping, and secondary action.
If I could get some feed on this little guy, that’d be great :smiley: I’d like to go back into it and add some more to it, like a storyline or something. Some ideas on that too would be great!

Also, I’ve added another animation, my unfolding box. It was a test mess up that I ended up putting all my hard work into as well.

Thanks!
Clock

Ball with tail
(Unfolding Box)

#2

I like the ball, it’s cute, but the perspective on the box is off.

#3

I like both of these, …I didn’t find the perspective of the box off…

#4

Thank you, both of you.

I’m working on some more animations that could use some feed back, I’ll upload them when I am done.

#5

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