Would appreciate help


#1

Dear viewers,

Can you help me? I’d like this to look as good as possible, but I haven’t been animating for too long and need some sharper eyes than my own to tear it apart.

Thanks!

My video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pe8HX72tAtQ


#2

Hi Jessica,
This is looking great. Although I am not an expert on this, I may suggest that you can improve your acting choices. I think the main accents on this audio clip is “stand” and “enough”. While you are hitting the the “stand” word with your subtle acting on the wall (which I think is great), you are missing the accent “enough”. You are hitting “somebody” with the fist but I think the fist should be on the “enough” accent.

Other than that I think you can still polish the hand on the wall.
Keep your good work.

Deniz


#3

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