WIP three very short animations - Critique & suggestions wanted!


#1

View them here!

Anim01 is for the current 11 Second Club. Still quite rough.

Anim02 is closest to completion, and I would really appreciate some suggestions on how I should light the scene and such!

Anim03 I’m having troubles figuring out how I should adjust the lifting of the yoke to make the weight believable. I’m devouring videos of people in weight lifting competitions, but it’s not quite the same.

Thanks in advance to anyone who offers help!


#2

Good start on all of them, although they are all very rough, I would focus on finishing up one animation instead of 3, preferably the 11 second club one because you have a week left!


#3

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