WIP Kreola : Sebastien Hue

#1

Here is my first WIP and concept for Kreola.

#2

Hio Sebastien,

The separation of the plate’s sides is nice, but having the chasm go right almost down the middle with very is causing a lot of tension for the composition. Also having some more indicated buildings in the background would make this feel a little bigger in scale. The beams going across the buildings are hard to understand though…not sure if they are too motivated for the story. Can you tell me what they are for? They could work if they had more form and function to it though, like maybe they’re used for some sort of transportation of items one side to another, or if they were wider, people too. Play with that idea some more and see if you can support it through the Kreola story. Keep going!

#3

Hello Sebastien,
I would suggest to have a few less of those connecting bridges across the gorge.
Otherwise keep going.
Milan

#4

Thanks a lot Milan, for your feedback. It’s really appreciated. I actually did an update.
kreola_WIP3.JPG

It needs connection this time maybe and refining of the top part of building to blend with the traditional architecture, here it’s just rough render for compo sake. Let me know your thoughts though, it would be cool!!
Cheers!

#5

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