Just a wip so far.
Here it is.
this is a nice peice. you have some guts to take a straight dialogue peice that is so long, but it is good. only thing i would recommend is some background action. maybe a static character or something in the background to bring some life into it. but you dont want to distract from the main character either so i dunno.
Its very cool and realistic, especially the begging when he thinks about were he went.
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