WIP - Adventuring

#16

Thanks for the help.

#17

Sketch.___________________________

#18

If this is Angelina Jolie and he’s Brad Pitt the scale are wrong… She look 1 feet higher.

#19

I know. I was looking for them to place this bad scene.

#20

Hey. Can somebody tell somebody else?

Can the characters must be placed in the inside poznmelya, and not outside?

#21

Not sure to understand your sentence. Can’t you clarify?

#22

Can I put the characters in the dungeon?

#23

If you want to, why couldn’t you?

#24

I think the model is good, but maybe you need some more work on sss shader, as now shadows look too opaque.

#25

Yes. But maybe you can change something in this scene? Make more realistic.

#26

What specifically can you advise?

#27

First of all choose a different light setup, its too one sided, play around with a new setup, make the light model your object, it has to be appealing to the eye, it has to catch people’s attention at first sight, perhaps if the scene took place inside the dungeon would be better, so you throw in a couple of torches to light the scene, then you start building a simple three point light setup, play around with it until you have an interesting lighting system.

Then focus on all your shaders, they look too simple, that’s why it looks fake, for example, look at his armor or at her clothes, its just a simple mate, where’s the dirt, dust, scratches, etc.

#28

Thanks for the advice.

#29

How to fix it.

#30

Dungeon. Sketch.----------------------

#31

Surely no one, nothing can advise?

#32

Dungeon. Sketch 2.----------------------
Dungeon. Sketch 2.-------------------

#33

Dungeon. Sketch 2.1…

http://render.ru/xen/attachments/6786-jpg.222467/

#34

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#35

Placed sorceress on stage.

http://render.ru/xen/attachments/4kk-jpg.225698/

Why can not I upload a picture?